I haven't seen Korra yet, but the more I see it referenced in fandom, the more I suspect the Equalists are going to be like the Abominators in Dragonriders of Pern: straw villains who make a point the narrative never quite manages to address. I hope it doesn't turn out like that.
That should say "she couldn't see with her eyes," not "...their eyes." You're also missing an L in "she'll feel small and afraid again."
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I haven't seen Korra yet, but the more I see it referenced in fandom, the more I suspect the Equalists are going to be like the Abominators in Dragonriders of Pern: straw villains who make a point the narrative never quite manages to address. I hope it doesn't turn out like that.
That should say "she couldn't see with her eyes," not "...their eyes." You're also missing an L in "she'll feel small and afraid again."