ext_100383 ([identity profile] la-localfreak.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] attackfish 2007-12-12 01:28 pm (UTC)

This is brilliant (though I wish I'd paid attention to whether it was a WIP or not before I clicked it as I'm currently experiencing the agony of suspense...) really well written, although a couple of typos where it appears the first letter of a word gets missed off which are easily fixable (e.g. [s]pill the tea, I should have known you [w]ere on our side etc) and 'Mom' instead of 'Mum' which confused me a little but these are relatively minor points in the face of the sheer pleasure the fic brings.

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