I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far. Have no fear, I will be posting another chapter soon (Friday at the latest, my school scheduled finals and registration the same week, it's been crazy).
Thank you for correcting my typos, I have a part time semi-beta, but she misses things, and it's notoriously difficult to find obvious errors in one's own writing. I've gone back and fixed the ones you mentioned.
Mum is the British word for Mom, used throughout the Harry Potter series, even in the American printing, so, since it was in the American printing (and I'm not likely to find a good Brit-picker, so I'm only using the Britishisms common to the American printing)Mum is the word of choice.
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Thank you for correcting my typos, I have a part time semi-beta, but she misses things, and it's notoriously difficult to find obvious errors in one's own writing. I've gone back and fixed the ones you mentioned.
Mum is the British word for Mom, used throughout the Harry Potter series, even in the American printing, so, since it was in the American printing (and I'm not likely to find a good Brit-picker, so I'm only using the Britishisms common to the American printing)Mum is the word of choice.