Wow. That is creepy. I wasn't even sure I was going to finish it because of the *shudder* factor, but I'm glad I did! First off, the match-up of June and Koh is just made of awesome. Those are two I wouldn't dream of facing off (no pun intended) just because they have their own levels of awesome that are hard to compare. But you did an amazing job of bringing them together, and I gotta say, I loved how you kept June and Koh both perfectly IC without making either one look silly in comparison to the other. In other words, their interaction was incredibly believable!

Also, great job on giving Koh some personality. June was spot-on in analyzing him, and I loved that he has some vulnerability while still remaining this inhuman monster. In the end, I felt both sympathy and disgust for him, and believe me, it's way hard to evoke both those emotions at once. ;)

Btw, “Sometimes when they’re lying in their beds, they aren’t slipping off to sleep.” -- that is the creepiest thing I've read in a long time. Thanks for introducing me to possible Koh-themed nightmares. XD

Seriously, though, this is an incredible gift. The amount of work you put into it really shows, and I'm unbelievably delighted that you spent so much time and care! Koh is by far one of my favorite characters, and I think you captured him perfectly.

Also, I love the team tag and will most certainly be using it. The only downside is that image has somehow now made me ship Koh/Aang. D: