Ooh, I loved this :D! So many parts I liked. The part where Sokka and Katara go looking for candy, the Agni Kai (Zuko should consider himself lucky that Zhao didn't notice the accidental airbending), Katara attempting to defend her brother by attacking the guard... I agree that Zuko is better than he thinks. It's just that he's usually up against prodigies like Azula and Aang. I think there's just 1 little mistake: "Before they turned to follow Zuko, they stuck their tongues out at ZUKO'S men." Shouldn't it be ZHAO's men?
Re: Agni Kai against Zhao, Part 4/4
I agree that Zuko is better than he thinks. It's just that he's usually up against prodigies like Azula and Aang.
I think there's just 1 little mistake: "Before they turned to follow Zuko, they stuck their tongues out at ZUKO'S men." Shouldn't it be ZHAO's men?