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So I just finished writing something so impossibly sweet that I swear all my teeth just rotted in my head from it. And since I have to write floranna's fic for

help_haiti (and her request is full of lovely angst) I need to get myself in a darker writing groove. To further this goal, I’m watching Criminal Minds, and I’m asking you guys to send me your darkest, most angst producing prompts for Avatar: The Last Airbender. Comment with up to five, and I’ll guarantee you at least one commentfic. I’ll probably answer with more, knowing me.

weirdlet and

floranna get seven requests and a guarantee of two fics, because I spawned a wild AU in

weirdlet ’s head, that she has been writing delightfully twisted installments for, and because I delayed writing

floranna’s promised fic to work on my novel.

Please no rape or sexually explicit requests. I’m a big believer that there needs to be more gen darkfic in fandom.

Ganked from

avocado_love .

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Despite the fact that I asked for no requests involving rape or sexually explicit requests, my brain decided to take me there all on its own in two instances. I've done my best to warn as accurately as I can in both in a way that the warnings themselves are non-triggery. I'd also like to put up a blanket warning for violence.

Fics:

for

floranna

help_haiti :
Azula's lightning strike on Zuko has some far more serious consequences
Zuko hurt his leg on the run and it won’t heal: Part One l Part Two l Part Three l Part Four l Part Five l Part Six l Part Seven
*Warning for heavily implied Rape by Coercion and Sexually Abusive Dialogue* Bonus: AU of “Sun Child”, Zura’s pregnant with Zhao’s child continued from Zhao: Wedded and bedded (AU of Sun Child), both of which are AUs of

weirdlet 's Sun Child AU

for[Bad username or site: � animikii @ livejournal.com] :
Suki’s just as calmly insane as Azula is. She just hides it better

for

weirdlet :
Zhao: Wedded and bedded (AU of Sun Child) continued in Bonus: AU of “Sun Child”, Zura’s pregnant with Zhao’s child, (*Warning for heavily implied Rape by Coercion and Sexually Abusive Dialogue*) both of which are AUs of

weirdlet 's Sun Child AU
Koh's eggs
Eric Bogle’s “And The Band Played Waltzing Matilda”
I sometimes imagine Jet's hiding a set of stripes under his shirt- how'd he come to experience such a flogging?

for

blue_lacquer :
Zhao helps his chances of being promoted by getting rid of his competition
What Chit Sang did to end up in the Boiling Rock
Zhao destroying part of Wan Shi Tong’s library
The Omashu Earth Kingdom resistance succeeds in killing Mai’s family (but not her)

for

avocado_love :
Why exactly the turtle-ducks fear Azula so much
Lao Bei Fong will do anything to keep his daughter safe, even from herself
Zuko: Directly after the Agni Kai
Bonus: some fluffy Toph/Zuko, all grown up (not dark)

for

clockwerkchaos :
At the North Pole something goes wrong with La, and the Fire Nation sinks beneath the sea

for

yma2 :
The story of Lu Ten’s death
Zuko finds his mother (or more accurately, Ursa finds him)
Aang isn’t rescued by the Blue Spirit and is imprisoned for a long time Part One l Part Two

for

beboots :
S2, Iroh dies, leaving Zuko without his influence continued in Zuko breaks down in front of the Gaang and further continued in The Gaang in Ba Sing Se
Jet decides NOT to gather proof that Mushi and Lee are firebenders before he acts

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She really doesn't have much of a experience, even if she is a mother. And Zhao is a relly, really big asshole.

How could I forget to request anything from this verse? *gasp* Luckily you did it anyway. ^^

Well, you got around to requesting it in the end, lol.

He really really is, so much so I think he gave her PTSD. *decides she needs a great big late medieval articulated steel gauntlet to pet him with, whack!* Now that I think about it, this snippet should have been called "Avatar does Gothic literature."

Hello. I realize I'm popping out of nowhere here... but I've a request and a uh... well a request.

1: The story of Iroah's son's death.

And also, can you recommend me any other good Avatar Dark Fic?

Ooh... now this, I like. I mean, Zhao's dialogue hit me like a kick to the chest (especially that one about Zura flinching D: ), but I like that Zura's already turning this to her (and Lan Min's!) advantage. :) You know, I've never been more glad to read a fic where Zhao dies?

*Snerk* Zhao's an awesome character in a lot of ways, but he's still a nasty son of a bitch. I love him for it, and love to make him pay for it. Glad to know you liked it too.

I'm still taking requests if you want to drop a few.

Hmm, Darkfic, darkfic... These are in no particular order, mind.

The Madness of Dawn (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5530042/1/The_Madness_of_dawn) by Stingmon (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/830458/): Your name is Li; you're not a bender. Your name is Li; you're not a bender. Your name's Li; you're not a bender. One-sided Jetko.

One (http://avocado-love.livejournal.com/14095.html) by

avocado_love: Chained and imprisoned, Zuko’s only escape is in his own memories.

Lux et Lex (http://artemisrae.livejournal.com/97443.html) by

artemisrae: No refugee is safe in Ba Sing Se – especially if you’re a firebender on the run. Zuko runs afoul of the Dai Lee. AU.

Resistence is Futile (http://jakia.livejournal.com/39726.html) by

jakia: No summary provided by the author, but trust me, it's a must read.

Crossing (http://sodomquake.livejournal.com/162521.html) by

sodomquake: 1. The act by which anything is crossed; as, the crossing of the ocean. [...] 4. Intersection, as of two paths or roads. [...] 6. Contradiction; thwarting; obstruction. (Webster's Revised Unabridged) READ THE WARNINGS

married to the flames (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4952538/1/married_to_the_flames) by Serendipity1 (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/49773/): Jin's married life proves to be anything but stable, but she's fine with that in a world where Ba Sing Se can fall and firebenders run teashops. AU, Jin/Zuko.

When All Your Dreams Come True (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3036180/1/When_All_Your_Dreams_Come_True) by Atiaran (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/225199/): AU during the First Season. Zuko has finally captured Aang and returned to the Fire Nation. He couldn't be happier. Really, he couldn't.

Also,

avocado_love's rec list is a wonderful resource. Part One (http://avocado-love.livejournal.com/23888.html) Part Two (http://avocado-love.livejournal.com/98659.html)

Oh, and I thought I should remind you, you can offer up to five prompts, so you still have four more.

Stones fell from the sky.

Stones flew from the ground.

Stones barreled into the Fire Nation troops, knocking them aside like Pai Sho tiles from an overturned board.

Lu Ten’s komodo-rhino surged forward to the new hole in the wall, picking its way through the debris. “No!” he shouted, but no one heard him over the thunder booms of the battle. He rounded in front of the charging soldiers, hand up. “Father, General Iroh, doesn’t want you to charge yet! The hole’s too small still. It’s a bottleneck.”

“Stupid boy!” One of the officers swept hard at him with a spear and Lu Ten leaned back far in the saddle to let it pass over him. “Get to the back of the army!”

But Lu Ten didn’t budge. When they pushed their way past them, he followed, still yelling his father’s wishes, but the soldiers were charge-happy. The city, they knew, was theirs.

As they jockeyed and jostled with each other for a place in line, two of the strange, robed benders from inside the city slid down the face of the walls and landed crouching on the ground. When the soldiers were in just the right place, they opened the ground up wide and slammed it closed over them. The tail end of the fissure trailed its way under Lu Ten’s feet, and he stared down at it trying to comprehend...

He saw the shadow on the ground around him just before the stone hit and he rolled... But the broken pieces ripped through his body completely.

Another request? Hmm... I'll feel horrible requesting bad stuff to happen to my favourite characters, but... ;)

What if, at any point during the first or second season, Iroh died, leaving Zuko without his influence?

What if Jet decided NOT to gather proof that Mushi and Lee were firebenders, and just did as his instincts told him to? (They'd never failed him before, after all...)

Very nice! I like the way you've caught the chaos and the confusion of war! And thank you for the recs. I shall think on some more suggestions...

Actually... here is one now...

2: Zuko finds his mother. (Darkfic, so with a dark twist some how, I'll leave it to your imagination what)

3: Avatar Aang is not rescued by the Blue Spirit and is captured by the Fire Nation and inprisoned for a long time. What happens to him exactly? What goes through his head? Ect...

4: Appa's time with the Evil!(tm) Circus.

5: Aang's son/daughter is a Waterbender, not an Airbender, meaning that Aang may be the last ever airbender. (take this in whatever direction you please. It's an interesting concept though. After all, who'll teach the next Avatar Airbending, if no Airbenders exist any more?)

Ooh, I definitely have some ideas for 2 and 3!

There are always my fics, (even if I'm new to the fandom, so there aren't that many of them) most of them are pretty dark. Yeah, I go in for shameless self promotion.

“Zuko, remember that plant that I thought might be tea?”

“You didn’t.” Zuko stared at his uncle’s back furiously.

“I did.” He turned around without a trace of guilt, face swollen and blotchy. “And it wasn’t.

Zuko recoiled. “Yah!”

Iroh kept his voice level, scratching the blotches determinedly. “When the rash spreads to my throat I will stop breathing.” Then he whipped out a branch tipped with a spray of pinkish berries. “But look what I found! These are bacui berries, known to cure the poison of the white jade plant. That, or macahoni berries that cause blindness.” He popped a handful into his mouth.

“What are you doing!” Zuko grabbed his uncle’s arm and pounded his back, but it was too late. Iroh had already swallowed. “Are you crazy? We need to get help.”

“But where are we going to go?” Iroh whimpered. “We’re enemies of the Earth Kingdom, and fugitives from the Fire Nation.”

“If the Earth Kingdom, discovers us, they’ll have us killed.” Zuko mused.

“But if the Fire Nation discovers us, we’ll be turned over to Azula.”

Zuko glanced at his uncle speculatively. “Earth Kingdom it is.”

“No!” Iroh snatched his nephew’s wrist. “You could be killed! If these are the bacui berries I’ll be fine, I don’t want to risk you!”

Zuko grabbed his uncle’s wrist with his already imprisoned hand and pulled. “Come on.”

Iroh didn’t move. “We wait.”

~*~

The sun moved lower down the sky before Iroh’s vision began to blur. “Nephew,” he rasped.

Wordlessly, Zuko helped him to his feet. Iroh’s feet faltered. His breathing came hoarse and shallow, and Zuko kept supporting him. The evening fell over them, and in the distance, village lights glowed on the horizon. Zuko’s shoulder ached, and all he could hear was his uncle’s noisy broken gasps. They got louder before they stopped entirely.

~*~

The air from around the fire hit him hard in the chest, flinging him hard into the street. The moan came out of his mouth choked and small, and he closed his eyes. The battle kept up around him. Fire ripped through the air above him. That was it. It didn’t matter anymore. Azula was going to capture the Avatar, bring him home, lock him away, drag Zuko along if she felt like bothering, get the throne. He closed his eyes and did his best not to care.

There was a scream before the sounds stopped, except for a couple of whining groans. Zuko kept his eyes closed and sighed.

“Hey, that guy’s heart’s still beating.” Zuko didn’t pay attention until a foot dug into his ribs. He opened his eyes, then closed them against the setting sun. Pulling his feet under himself, he levered his way to his feet shakily.

“Toph, get back,” the Water Tribe girl yelled, but Zuko had already shifted into a bending stance.

Stomping her foot, Toph opened up the ground beneath him. He fell until she stomped her foot again, closing it around his shoulders. “Don’t even think about it, Sparky.”

Zuko snarled. “Where’s Azula?”

“She ran off.” Toph cocked her head and smirked. “Why? Thinking of following her.”

He squirmed. “No.”

The Avatar skidded to a halt right in front of Zuko’s makeshift prison. “Are you okay? I saw you go flying, she must have hit you pretty hard.”

“I’m fine,” he snapped. “Just let me out.”

“Don’t you dare, Toph,” the Water Tribe girl called. “You have no idea what he can do.”

Zuko glared at her, but she didn’t seem to notice. “Maybe we should take him with us.”

“What? No!” The water arched around her and lashed the air.

The Water Tribe boy squeaked. “Are you out of you’re mind?”

“Hey, you have no idea how skinny he feels.” She folded her arms.

The Avatar looked from the earthbending girl to the Water Tribe pair and back again, biting his lip. “Alright, let’s get him on Appa.”

“No!” Zuko howled, but Toph brought her arms back and pushed. The earth surged up and plopped him down in the bison’s saddle.

The Water Tribe girl narrowed her eyes suspiciously as she climbed in next to him. “That girl, Azula, said you were family?”

“She’s my sister, so?”

The Water Tribe pair shared a look, and the girl uncorked her waterskin to heal the burns on the boy’s arm and chest.

Huzzah! :D

... although I really shouldn't be pleased that I technically caused Iroh's death. D: You picked a good way for him to go - realistically fitting within canon (doesn't make me wibble any less, though). I do like that Zuko stayed with his uncle until the end. ;_;

I'm glad that you left the fic on a slightly more uplifting note, though. :) For some reason, I really liked Toph's “Hey, you have no idea how skinny he feels” comment. Even a Toph who never knew Iroh realizes that Zuko isn't all bad. :)

I also liked that "look" that Sokka and Katara shared after hearing that it was Zuko's sister that did this to him. :) Nice little moment.

In short... thank you so much for writing this! :D

I noticed a few extra things I liked about this snippet, after a second reading an hour or so later!

Did Zuko actually just almost give up there? That's definitely different. Loss of Iroh, mayhap?

Also, Iroh dying because he was unwilling to seek help because it may put his nephew at risk for capture? Daaamn... ;_;

I do love how Toph is totally unconcerned about whatever possible "threat" that Zuko might pose (i.e.: none), though. XD I also totally didn't even notice that Aang was one of the first to actually show concern for Zuko's well-being. :)

Lol, you bad bad person, you, we're all going to a special hell. Zuko right now is this close to crying, poor kid, in front of the gaang and everything. I love Toph. IloveherIloveherIloveher. And she kind of makes Zuko want to die.

Those Water Tribe sibs, such a nice healthy family relationship.

Ooh, rereading! *blushes*

Zuko's having a depressive episode, poor baby, losing his last bit of family will do that, but I always kind of imagined what was going through his head as he lay there until Iroh helped him up.

Yeah, and it's eating at Zuko. Poor baby feels horribly guilty.

Toph's like "You think he can actually do anything? This, this is me laughing at you."

Aang's a good boy.

Oh yeah, no Iroh to tell him to "get up" and give him a hand anymore... ;_; Seriously, I believe that Iroh is the sole reason that Zuko didn't go completely insane after his father tried to burn half of his face off.

"You think he can actually do anything? This, this is me laughing at you." XD That sounds like Toph.

"Zuko right now is this close to crying, poor kid, in front of the gaang and everything." ;_; (I would love you forever if you actually wrote this happening - Zuko actually breaking down in front of his (now former?) enemies.)

Iroh is Zuko's rock, and I think you're right. Zuko would hate to admit it, but I think you're right.

I told you I love Toph.

Aha! Now I have an excuse! That's now next on the list after I finish the fic I'm finishing up for Floranna.

*glees quietly*

I think he might be Toph's pet now.

~*~

His arm was numb. The little earthbending girl, Toph, he reminded himself, was wrapped around it like a spider-snake, giving off enormous fake snores as the rest of the Avatar’s companions slept on oblivious. As he felt the sun rise, he tried to ease her arms down to slip his free, but she just tangled around him tighter, eyes still closed. “I know you’re awake,” he hissed.

“Yeah?” she whispered, “I know I’m awake too.”

“Let go!” He yanked his arm, and she obliged, waving as he rolled backwards down the bison’s side and onto the ground. The bison rumbled.

“Uh!” A spire of rock punted him back into the saddle.

Toph clicked her tongue. “Not at all rooted, are you, Sparky?” Before rolling back over, the Water Tribe boy blinked sleepily at them both. Zuko summoned up a scowl. Toph had latched back onto his arm.

~*~

Zuko spent the day brooding in the saddle, occasionally peering over the edge to watch the Avatar failing to learn to earthbend. When the Water Tribe girl dropped a bowl in front of him, he picked it up listlessly, and put it back down. “Toph’s right, you are skinny.” The Water Tribe girl narrowed her eyes. “What, haven’t you been eating?” Zuko glowered.

The Water Tribe boy glanced over. “Hey, you gonna eat that?” Zuko handed it over.

“Sokka!” she yelled. “Don’t you dare.”

Sokka froze. “But Katara!”

“Give it back.”

“I don’t want it, okay?” Zuko snapped, launching himself over the side of the saddle and sliding down to the ground. A pillar of stone hit him as soon as he landed, boosting him back into the saddle. “Stop doing that!” he cried. “Just let me leave, okay?”

Another rock spike deposited Toph next to him, and she threw her arm around his shoulders.

“You’re not going to try to capture Aang again, are you?” Katara eyed him sharply.

“No.” He tried to shrug her off, but Toph hung on tight.

“I can tell you’re lying!” Toph sang.

“Just let me go!”

The Avatar fluttered down into the saddle on the last word. “What’s going on?”

“Where would you go, anyway?” Sokka asked, spearing a piece of meat out of Katara’s bowl when she wasn’t looking. “We’re nowhere near the coast, your ship’s gotta be,” he spread his arms wide. “Weeks away on foot.”

“It got blown up.”

“Seriously?” Sokka snickered.

Zuko hunched his shoulders.

“What about your uncle?” the Avatar asked cheerfully.

“He’s dead, okay?” He shouted, but as soon as the last word left his mouth, his face crumpled. “He screwed up and...” Tears poured from his good eye and splattered on the saddle leather.

The earthbending girl, Toph’s, arm moved lower until she had pulled him into a tight hug. He didn’t know what to do. Before he’d even realized it, his arm was around her and he was sobbing into her shoulder. The others stared. He could feel them staring.

He tried to catch his breath, but it kept catching in his throat as whines. At last, he swiped the tears off his cheeks and broke away, voice hoarse. “I guess you think I’m part of your gang now.”

The all looked away.

“Yeah, well, I’m not,” he muttered. Toph grabbed back onto him.

*Glees more loudly* "I think he might be Toph's pet now." That sentence just made my day. Seriously, though, I love the way you've written their interactions. Especially this bit: "A spire of rock punted him back into the saddle." XD CONCUSSIONS AND BROKEN RIBS ARE HOW SHE SHOWS AFFECTION! You totally know that Toph uses Earthbending to move people around. :3 I also love the image of Toph clutching (an unwilling) Zuko by the arm.

And daaamn... not wanting to eat. ;_; Not healthy.

I love that Sokka just takes his food after being given it. XD SO in-character. The “It got blown up.”/“Seriously?” exchange was also awesome. I think it's very in-character for the GAang to still assume that Zuko has his ship. They haven't heard much news from the Fire Nation, right?

I liked the way Zuko explained/half-explained what happened to Iroh. ;_; (And that it was Aang who obliviously asked after Zuko's Uncle, because he's a nice kid like that.) I also do think that it's very in-character for Zuko to react that way to his uncle's death - we saw his expression when Azula blasted Iroh in The Chase.

Also, that last line? Excellent. :3 Oh, clingy!Toph... :3

In short: thank you so much for writing this! :D You made me ridiculously happy! (kind of like... inverted Zuko feelings?)

ZUKO DOESN'T UNDERSTAND THIS AND IT JUST FREAKS THE HELL OUT OF HIM. When they get lost in the desert, Zuko's the only one who's actually happy, because Toph doesn't know how to bounce him around with the sand. ZUKO BALL!

Yeah, Zuko's swinging back and forth from apathetic to completely freaking out. Not at all healthy. Kid has no idea how to handle grief. They're probably going to dig the full story out of him later, but right now, Zuko doesn't even realize he's only barely coherent. Iroh's his stability, and right now, things aren't really computing.

Sokka's like "What, he doesn't want it!" And of course he misses all the signs that maybe messing with Zuko's not such a good idea right then. Oh Sokka.

Toph says no, you do NOT get away that easy ;)

So the more miserable I make Zuko, the better you feel? You horrible horrible person.

Zuko needs a nice obsessive project to throw himself into. I think that's how he's dealt with prettymuch everything that life's ever thrown at him.

This is so true, and that's so unhealthy.

"ZUKO DOESN'T UNDERSTAND THIS AND IT JUST FREAKS THE HELL OUT OF HIM." ZUKO NEEDS TO LEARN HOW TO SPEAK TOPH'S LANGUAGE. Except that he probably would never actually hit a girl (unless she's Katara, in his way, or Azula, who is an insane psychopath). I mean, I don't think he'd find it honourable to hit girls he actually likes. Probably.

"They're probably going to dig the full story out of him later, but right now, Zuko doesn't even realize he's only barely coherent. Iroh's his stability, and right now, things aren't really computing." ;_; Well-said. He's just spiralling out of control inside, isn't he?

Hey, perhaps Toph will become his new ROCK! :D Not that Iroh can be replaced, but Toph's pretty solid, being from the Earth Kingdom and all. Plus, she doesn't seem like the time to put up with his whining, within reason.

Oh oblivious Sokka. :)

And yep, I suppose I am a horrible person. D: Really, it's the hurt-comfort I like, you know? And you can't really have meaningful "comfort" without first having the "hurt", so...

He tries to learn, really he does, but he can't make himself really hit her, and she just laughs at him. "You call that love tap a punch, Sparky? Stop it, that tickles."

You, you you! You're making me want to write more, like when Zuko gets to Ba Sing Se and votes for hightailing it out of there (and thereby earns Toph's eternal devotion), and the ramifications of the Fire Prince being there, and and and...

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