ext_127841 ([identity profile] beboots.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] attackfish 2010-02-22 11:01 pm (UTC)

Re: S2, Iroh dies, leaving Zuko without his influence

Huzzah! :D

... although I really shouldn't be pleased that I technically caused Iroh's death. D: You picked a good way for him to go - realistically fitting within canon (doesn't make me wibble any less, though). I do like that Zuko stayed with his uncle until the end. ;_;

I'm glad that you left the fic on a slightly more uplifting note, though. :) For some reason, I really liked Toph's “Hey, you have no idea how skinny he feels” comment. Even a Toph who never knew Iroh realizes that Zuko isn't all bad. :)

I also liked that "look" that Sokka and Katara shared after hearing that it was Zuko's sister that did this to him. :) Nice little moment.

In short... thank you so much for writing this! :D

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