attackfish: Yshre girl wearing a kippah, text "Attackfish" (Jet Juko TDL quote)
attackfish ([personal profile] attackfish) wrote2010-01-29 11:51 pm

Avatar: The Last Airbender Darkfic Comment Meme

So I just finished writing something so impossibly sweet that I swear all my teeth just rotted in my head from it.  And since I have to write floranna's fic for [livejournal.com profile] help_haiti  (and her request is full of lovely angst) I need to get myself in a darker writing groove.  To further this goal, I’m watching Criminal Minds, and I’m asking you guys to send me your darkest, most angst producing prompts for Avatar: The Last Airbender.  Comment with up to five, and I’ll guarantee you at least one commentfic.  I’ll probably answer with more, knowing me.  [livejournal.com profile] weirdlet  and [livejournal.com profile] floranna  get seven requests and a guarantee of two fics, because I spawned a wild AU in [livejournal.com profile] weirdlet ’s head, that she has been writing delightfully twisted installments for, and because I delayed writing [livejournal.com profile] floranna’s promised fic to work on my novel.

Please no rape or sexually explicit requests.  I’m a big believer that there needs to be more gen darkfic in fandom.

Ganked from [livejournal.com profile] avocado_love .


Meme Closed and Finished

Despite the fact that I asked for no requests involving rape or sexually explicit requests, my brain decided to take me there all on its own in two instances.  I've done my best to warn as accurately as I can in both in a way that the warnings themselves are non-triggery.  I'd also like to put up a blanket warning for violence.

Fics:

for [livejournal.com profile] floranna[livejournal.com profile] help_haiti :
Azula's lightning strike on Zuko has some far more serious consequences
Zuko hurt his leg on the run and it won’t heal: 
Part One l Part Two l Part Three l Part Four l Part Five l Part Six l Part Seven
*Warning for heavily implied Rape by Coercion and Sexually Abusive Dialogue* Bonus: AU of “Sun Child”, Zura’s pregnant with Zhao’s child continued from Zhao: Wedded and bedded (AU of Sun Child), both of which are AUs of [livejournal.com profile] weirdlet 's Sun Child AU

for[Bad username or site: animikii @ livejournal.com] :
Suki’s just as calmly insane as Azula is. She just hides it better

for [livejournal.com profile] weirdlet :
Zhao: Wedded and bedded (AU of Sun Child)  continued in Bonus: AU of “Sun Child”, Zura’s pregnant with Zhao’s child, (*Warning for heavily implied Rape by Coercion and Sexually Abusive Dialogue*) both of which are AUs of [livejournal.com profile] weirdlet 's Sun Child AU
Koh's eggs
Eric Bogle’s “And The Band Played Waltzing Matilda”
I sometimes imagine Jet's hiding a set of stripes under his shirt- how'd he come to experience such a flogging?

for [livejournal.com profile] blue_lacquer :
Zhao helps his chances of being promoted by getting rid of his competition
What Chit Sang did to end up in the Boiling Rock
Zhao destroying part of Wan Shi Tong’s library
The Omashu Earth Kingdom resistance succeeds in killing Mai’s family (but not her)

for [livejournal.com profile] avocado_love :
Why exactly the turtle-ducks fear Azula so much
Lao Bei Fong will do anything to keep his daughter safe, even from herself
Zuko: Directly after the Agni Kai
Bonus: some fluffy Toph/Zuko, all grown up (not dark)

for [livejournal.com profile] clockwerkchaos :
At the North Pole something goes wrong with La, and the Fire Nation sinks beneath the sea

for [livejournal.com profile] yma2 :
The story of Lu Ten’s death
Zuko finds his mother (or more accurately, Ursa finds him)
Aang isn’t rescued by the Blue Spirit and is imprisoned for a long time Part One l Part Two

for [livejournal.com profile] beboots :
S2, Iroh dies, leaving Zuko without his influence continued in Zuko breaks down in front of the Gaang and further continued in The Gaang in Ba Sing Se
Jet decides NOT to gather proof that Mushi and Lee are firebenders before he acts


Zuko finds his mother (or more accurately, Ursa finds him)

[identity profile] attackfish.livejournal.com 2010-02-24 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I’m heavily influenced by [livejournal.com profile] suzukiblu’s meme responses of a fairly sinister Ursa.

~*~

She was the Regicide, the killer of rulers.

She had no honor, but she had fear.

She would make him fear her.

She stepped forward into the shifting glare of the firewall, hands clasped, face impassive, and knelt down.

“Mom?” The flames died away and the young Firelord sprinted down the steps. “Mom!” The soldiers had warned her about the scar, but she hadn’t realized it would be so... His hug knocked the air out of her. She pushed him back. No, not yet! She couldn’t embrace him yet, if she did, she’d never, she had to...

“Zuko, no.”

The Firelord stared at her. “What?”

“I have to tell you something first. Zuko, I-” She stopped, and forced her voice to keep steady. “I killed your grandfather.”

“I know.”

“And do you know why?” she asked, unable to look at him.

The Firelord bowed his head and nodded. He was shorter than she was still. She wondered how long that would last.

“Then you know I’m willing to do whatever has to be done.” She stood back, hands in her sleeves. “And I’m willing to do it to you.”

When he spoke, the word came out only as a dull croak. “Mom!”

“I already did it once,” she muttered to him. “I killed my Firelord, the father of my husband.”

“Yes!” he gasped. “For me! To keep me alive!”

“And you don’t want his death to be in vain, do you?” she demanded cruelly.

His good eye was wide in his face, like a hole.

She sat down on the steps to the dais, her arms open. He hesitated before he came near and let her hold him. “I don’t want to hurt you,” she breathed, closing her eyes and stroking his burned cheek. Little flinches followed her fingers. “But this ‘cessation of hostilities’? It’s surrender, and it’s shameful. You bring shame to the Fire Nation with it.” Her eyes narrowed and she shook her head. And to say this war is our fault, and pay reparations? The rest of the world is going to eat us alive, and you’re sitting around spitting on the graves of soldiers.”

“I’m not, Mom.” He tried to keep his voice hard, but it just came out small and afraid. “It’s our fault and our responsibility to make it right.”

“Oh my son,” she murmured. “What lies have they been telling you?”

He broke away from her, thinking fast. His feet hammered on the dais steps as he climbed, and when he reached the top, the wall of fire went up before he sat down. “I will consider what you said carefully.

Kneeling back down, she smiled up at him sadly. “I’m sure you’ll come to the right decision.”

As soon as her footsteps fell away, blinking hard, he snatched a piece of paper off the stack and spread it over his writing desk to draft an arrest warrant on charges of treason and murder.

She was the Regicide, the killer of rulers

Re: Zuko finds his mother (or more accurately, Ursa finds him)

[identity profile] yma2.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Nice! Dark and interestng and oh, not the direction I expected it to take, but very good indeed! I especially loved the end, the way it keeps yuo hanging whilst also -giving- you an end. Splended stuff!

Re: Zuko finds his mother (or more accurately, Ursa finds him)

[identity profile] attackfish.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
I'm really glad you liked it even if it didn't take the direction you thought it did.

Um, I went and tracked these down because I thought you might be interested.

Here's the sinister Ursa commentfic I mentioned in my note (http://community.livejournal.com/white_knuckle/46670.html?thread=660046#t660046)
And here's another angsty (for a different reason) commentfic with Zuko finding Ursa by the same author (http://community.livejournal.com/white_knuckle/39451.html?thread=279579#t279579)