Date: 2008-07-15 06:43 am (UTC)
I do agree and I can't wait for her to grow up. It's just that you have managed to portray as a rather nasty character. While she does have redeeming points it's hard to overlook her flaws since as a reader I'm more sympathetic to snape and harry. Does that makes sense?

There is something that bugs me though. I don't get how harry is able to jump back to ginny so quickly after his time-traveling episode. Perhaps you can expand more on that?
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