Though I don't think you handle the Harry-Eileen relationship all that well, it feels like you want to get it out of the way as soon as possible to concentrate on the consequences in present time. But as said consequences will probably be the main concern of the story, I can't complain all that much.
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Date: 2007-10-24 12:57 pm (UTC)Though I don't think you handle the Harry-Eileen relationship all that well, it feels like you want to get it out of the way as soon as possible to concentrate on the consequences in present time. But as said consequences will probably be the main concern of the story, I can't complain all that much.