Let me just take a moment to say all I forgot to say last comment. I can honestly say that this is one of the best ATLA FIFA I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The plot is original and engaging, it's not completely mucked up in obsessive snippy romance, it's well written and the main character is Zuko who is awesome and my favorite haracter and you write him absolutely beautifully, which is sadly hard to find. And you manage to make it angsty without making us drown in it which is also awesome. I love how you portray Zuko's reaction to having Lu Ten back in their lives. Absolutely spot on. I can't wait for more and I hope you have them meet up with the Gaang sometime especially Toph cuz she and Zuko are besties. I hope Zuko can finally find his place in the world and be at peace with himself. Maybe he'll become the next chief of the Northern Water Tribe, which would be totally awesome, even though he really would have made the most amazing Fire Lord. And I can't wait to see Somka and Katara's reaction to all this. Especially Katara. Something tells me that won't be very pretty.
Keep up the amazing writing and hope to see more of this soon! I've read through some of your other fics and you really do do an amazing job. Salud!
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Re: Awesome!
Date: 2013-03-18 07:46 pm (UTC)Let me just take a moment to say all I forgot to say last comment. I can honestly say that this is one of the best ATLA FIFA I have ever had the pleasure of reading. The plot is original and engaging, it's not completely mucked up in obsessive snippy romance, it's well written and the main character is Zuko who is awesome and my favorite haracter and you write him absolutely beautifully, which is sadly hard to find. And you manage to make it angsty without making us drown in it which is also awesome. I love how you portray Zuko's reaction to having Lu Ten back in their lives. Absolutely spot on. I can't wait for more and I hope you have them meet up with the Gaang sometime especially Toph cuz she and Zuko are besties. I hope Zuko can finally find his place in the world and be at peace with himself. Maybe he'll become the next chief of the Northern Water Tribe, which would be totally awesome, even though he really would have made the most amazing Fire Lord. And I can't wait to see Somka and Katara's reaction to all this. Especially Katara. Something tells me that won't be very pretty.
Keep up the amazing writing and hope to see more of this soon! I've read through some of your other fics and you really do do an amazing job. Salud!