The door opened, and Neal dropped his hat and his jacket onto the table. Moz stepped out of the evening shadows at the edge of the room. “You ran to the suit.”
Neal put his hands up. “Moz-”
“I can't believe you ran to the suit!”
This part just *hurts*. And it touches so perfectly on the crux of the conflict or strain or whatever you want to call it between Mozzie, Neal, and Peter. There's just that *something* Neal needs that he can get from Peter and not from Mozzie, and it's that part of him that Mozzie just can't understand.
And I love Mozzie's fierce loyalty as Neal's apartment is being searched. You've done an amazing job with his character in this.
Great story!
Jumping on the S3 discussion bandwagon here, I have to say that Mozzie's character development is the one part of S3 that I'm really enjoying. I think it was really ballsy of the writers to darken him as much as they have, and while there are things that I feel they've...fumbled...this season, it's to their credit -- and to Willie Garson's credit as an actor -- that they could take Mozzie where they did and still have him be sympathetic.
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Date: 2011-11-01 11:33 pm (UTC)The door opened, and Neal dropped his hat and his jacket onto the table. Moz stepped out of the evening shadows at the edge of the room. “You ran to the suit.”
Neal put his hands up. “Moz-”
“I can't believe you ran to the suit!”
This part just *hurts*. And it touches so perfectly on the crux of the conflict or strain or whatever you want to call it between Mozzie, Neal, and Peter. There's just that *something* Neal needs that he can get from Peter and not from Mozzie, and it's that part of him that Mozzie just can't understand.
And I love Mozzie's fierce loyalty as Neal's apartment is being searched. You've done an amazing job with his character in this.
Great story!
Jumping on the S3 discussion bandwagon here, I have to say that Mozzie's character development is the one part of S3 that I'm really enjoying. I think it was really ballsy of the writers to darken him as much as they have, and while there are things that I feel they've...fumbled...this season, it's to their credit -- and to Willie Garson's credit as an actor -- that they could take Mozzie where they did and still have him be sympathetic.