Oh - wow, this is amazing. :D I just don't have words for how amazing this is. It's the most incredible, original idea about dragons - I absolutely love it - and it made me laugh (Mozzie and Elizabeth finding out about Neal) and it made me go awwww (tiny!Neal curled up in Peter's briefcase; Kate and Neal), and then the anger between Peter and Neal is built so convincingly (Neal refusing to let Peter pet him anymore, for all kinds of reasons), and it builds up to that fight and then the most gorgeous, heartbreaking/touching way for Neal to apologize ever. I just want to cling to that last image forever.
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Date: 2011-12-08 10:13 am (UTC)