*Glees more loudly* "I think he might be Toph's pet now." That sentence just made my day. Seriously, though, I love the way you've written their interactions. Especially this bit: "A spire of rock punted him back into the saddle." XD CONCUSSIONS AND BROKEN RIBS ARE HOW SHE SHOWS AFFECTION! You totally know that Toph uses Earthbending to move people around. :3 I also love the image of Toph clutching (an unwilling) Zuko by the arm.
And daaamn... not wanting to eat. ;_; Not healthy.
I love that Sokka just takes his food after being given it. XD SO in-character. The “It got blown up.”/“Seriously?” exchange was also awesome. I think it's very in-character for the GAang to still assume that Zuko has his ship. They haven't heard much news from the Fire Nation, right?
I liked the way Zuko explained/half-explained what happened to Iroh. ;_; (And that it was Aang who obliviously asked after Zuko's Uncle, because he's a nice kid like that.) I also do think that it's very in-character for Zuko to react that way to his uncle's death - we saw his expression when Azula blasted Iroh in The Chase.
Also, that last line? Excellent. :3 Oh, clingy!Toph... :3
In short: thank you so much for writing this! :D You made me ridiculously happy! (kind of like... inverted Zuko feelings?)
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Re: Continuation: Zuko breaks down in front of the Gaang
Date: 2010-02-24 04:35 am (UTC)And daaamn... not wanting to eat. ;_; Not healthy.
I love that Sokka just takes his food after being given it. XD SO in-character. The “It got blown up.”/“Seriously?” exchange was also awesome. I think it's very in-character for the GAang to still assume that Zuko has his ship. They haven't heard much news from the Fire Nation, right?
I liked the way Zuko explained/half-explained what happened to Iroh. ;_; (And that it was Aang who obliviously asked after Zuko's Uncle, because he's a nice kid like that.) I also do think that it's very in-character for Zuko to react that way to his uncle's death - we saw his expression when Azula blasted Iroh in The Chase.
Also, that last line? Excellent. :3 Oh, clingy!Toph... :3
In short: thank you so much for writing this! :D You made me ridiculously happy! (kind of like... inverted Zuko feelings?)