1. I really enjoyed the fact that Zuko does, indeed, know his crew. Adding this detail really adds to his character, since it shows the mixture of contempt and pain Zuko feels towards his men. It's a great detail.
2. Laying Aang to rest with Gyatso is heart-wrenching, but beautiful. Such a sad, but fitting resting place.
3. Zuko and Aangs interactions are a great mixture of Season 1 Zuko's anger and Season 3 Aang's enthusiasm. Their banter reminds me a little of their side-trip in The Firebending Masters.
4. Thank you for explaining how in the cycle Zuko came to be the Avatar. I was wondering if two Avatars had come to pass in your world, or if the cycle was somehow flipped. This explains a lot and ties your fic into canon. Also, I really enjoyed that Lu was from the Foggy Swamp Tribe.
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Re: Laying Aang to rest at the Southern Air Temple, Part 7/7
Date: 2012-05-15 06:35 am (UTC)1. I really enjoyed the fact that Zuko does, indeed, know his crew. Adding this detail really adds to his character, since it shows the mixture of contempt and pain Zuko feels towards his men. It's a great detail.
2. Laying Aang to rest with Gyatso is heart-wrenching, but beautiful. Such a sad, but fitting resting place.
3. Zuko and Aangs interactions are a great mixture of Season 1 Zuko's anger and Season 3 Aang's enthusiasm. Their banter reminds me a little of their side-trip in The Firebending Masters.
4. Thank you for explaining how in the cycle Zuko came to be the Avatar. I was wondering if two Avatars had come to pass in your world, or if the cycle was somehow flipped. This explains a lot and ties your fic into canon. Also, I really enjoyed that Lu was from the Foggy Swamp Tribe.
Kudos!