THIS was fantastic! One of my favorite couples and you captured Mai wonderfully! You have a wonderful writing style as well...this is going to sound weird, but it's a bit like a silhouette, just enough detail but enough it gives you imagination to see beyond just this. (Just what I see your story being, it's perfect because you gave us something to imagine!) You conveyed their relationship in very few words, which I admire! Excellent job and I'm sorry if I sound strange!
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branchandroot
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Date: 2012-05-28 02:50 am (UTC)